If twilight becomes an alicorn, she will inevitably outlive her friends...
thats the only thing i see to be a little problem with it.
but any way, i cant wait till the next episode. cheers!
EDIT: just added a few things and fixed stuff like Fluttershy's name on her tombstone and gave twilight her cutie mark
EDIT 2: fixed Rainbow Dash's name XD
EDIT: yes I've known for a wile she isn't immortal. this mlp stuff confuses me sometimes